I have been used smartphone for about 6
years and, as far as I am concerned, most of us would probably have his/her own
smartphone, for smartphone really do a good help to our daily life. It’s also
hard to say what our lives would be if we don’t have a smartphone anymore when
we get used to it for so many years.
From that survey done by Zomorodi and her
producers, we can see that most people kill their time by using smartphone
and have a high frequency phone check-ins of their normal days like what we did
in our free time. Things always have the other side; in addition, spending too
much time on the phone is not a good habit for us. As a result, which was also
claimed by Zomorodi, people get their most original ideas from their bored-time,
but now, these time have been spent on the cell phone; In other words, smartphone will kill many original ideas when people use it all the time.
People still can’t leave with their
smartphones; consequently, smartphones have already been part of people’s
lives. We can try more on how to do things which are meaningful for us and enjoy our boredom without
cell phone. That would much better!
It can be seen that the author has a very clear outline about the thing he's gonna say. There are some grammar mistakes like"most people killed..should be most people kill
ReplyDeletetheir time ...I like the author's opinion overall! Good job!
It can be seen that the author has a very clear outline about the thing he's gonna say. There are some grammar mistakes like"most people killed..should be most people kill
ReplyDeletetheir time ...I like the author's opinion overall! Good job!
Thanks for your opinion, I'll correct the mistake I have made! Anyway, I have to say, I hate the grammar. T T
DeleteI really agree this opinion. Smartphones have already been part of our lives. If we rely on it too much, it will do harm for us. We should just use it when we really need it. 66666666
ReplyDeleteI do with your opinion that we just use it when we need it. Although it's hard for us to reduce the time playing with smartphone, we can try to do other things for fun.
Delete" In other words, smartphone will kill many original ideas when people use it all the time." I really love this sentence and it may make people take the situation more seriously.
ReplyDeleteThanks! :)
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